I am just having one person in this ad.
Have you experienced this month’s Manx experience?
The elegant sophisticated magazine for you.
It’s got lots of exciting stuff including a giveaway from Manx Telecom, news on a mystery store opening and lots more all for just £2.50.
Get out and experience yours now!
I had to change the end bit too
experience yours now
I changed it because the get out didnt sound good
I used a rhetorical question and the begging to get the listeners involved. I wanted to play on the word experience that's why i used it so much, i think it works well. Also i didn't want to include to much information about whats in the magazine so i just give a taster of 2 things. I included the price because everyone likes to know the price if they are interested in buying something.
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